Refine the 'About Us' Text For a Clothing Brand Involved With Surf, Fight, and Streetwear.

BRAINSTORMING TO GET THE RIGHT PITCH

IT TAKES A BIT OF RESEARCH AS WELL AS MARKET RESEARCH TO DETERMINE BRANDING -- I NEED A DAY OR TWO BEFORE I CAN DELIVER 2-3 SETS OF DIFFERENT ENTRIES BUT I HAVE UPLOADED A FEW SAMPLES FROM MY OWN BUSINESSES. YOU MAY CHAT WITH ME IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS. THANKS!