Rewriting an existing sales page copy - Low word quantity.

Hey i want some talented copywrites to look at my sales page and add some power to it. it converting about 0.80% wich makes me break even with this one. since its not a "website" anyway, i belive the problem here is the copywriting since the page is converting (indicates not to heavy credibility problems are made) but not enough. check it out [login to view URL] please bid on re-writing each of its sections in the mind of helping me sell better. if testimonials is a must, make some, calculate everything you have in mind to make is sell better, then bid. i wont even answer to bids like "sure we handled hunders of those" or any copy&paste replay. please make your bid subject oriented - if you cant see how you help this baby, drop it. looking forward working with you soon :)