WRITER
Hi, please consider the paragraph below and its paraphrased version. If the quality is satisfactory to then, I would like to be considered for your job. Thanks.
ORIGINAL
We have a strong history of our students successfully completing their senior secondary education and gaining Vocational Education and Training (VET) qualifications that are Nationally recognised. Students graduate SEDA as mature, resilient, independent and capable young adults with the ability to both lead and work within teams. Our students are well placed to make informed choices about their next step towards employment or further study.
PARAPHRASED
Over the years, we have built a reputation of successfully graduating mature, resilient and self-reliant young adults because by the time we are through with them they will have acquired the necessary teamwork abilities and leadership skills. They usually go on to graduate from secondary school and gain nationally recognized Vocational Education and Training (VET) qualifications. In short, they are drilled well enough to thrive in paid employment or graduate studies.